想要提高雅思写作的分数,不能仅仅只从单一的多练多写上面来提高,还需要从一些写作的习惯上来改变,例如词汇的使用、句式的表达等其他更加能够体现水平的方式来改变。
雅思写作用词注意要点一:使用具体的动词
比较具体的描写会让文章看起来更有说服力,分数当然能提高啦!
例如:
1、Poor:My supervisor went past my desk.
Better:My supervisor sauntered (=walked slowly) past my desk.
2、Poor:She is a careful shopper.
Better:She compares prices and quality.
雅思写作用词注意要点二:表语转化为不同的修饰语很多烤鸭不明白什么时候用主动,什么被动!用错了,雅思写作分数自然不高!这样做,也是因为这个原因!
例如:
1、Weak:The organization has been supported by charity.
Better:Charity has supported the organization.
2、Weak:The biscuits were stacked on a plate.
Better:Mother stacked the biscuits on a plate.
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雅思写作用词注意要点三:避免使用语言弱的“be”动词1、在“here”或“there”开头的句子中,把“be”动词后的名词代词变成改写句的主语例如:
1) Weak:Here are the books you ordered.
Revision:The books you ordered have arrived.
2) Weak:There is no opportunity for promotion.
Revision:No opportunity for promotion exists.
2、表语转换为不同的修饰语
例如:
Weak:The trees are bare. The grass is brown. The landscape seems drab.
Revision:The brown grass and bare trees form a drab landscape. (转换为前置定语)Or:The landscape, bare and brown, begged for spring green. (转换为并列结构作后置定语)。
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